Plan for Revision

 Plan for Revision

I am quite grateful that this class is based around a research proposal and not a whole research plan because I feel behind on even just the proposal. Dylan was able to help me quite a bit on some of the ways that I can revise my outline for my research proposal. I think essentially I need to make my proposal more specific. I need to specify which types of technical writing I will be examining to connect social media to mass shooters. I need to specify which shooters in specific I will be analyzing. I need to specify the criteria that would deem a contagion effect true based on the information that is analyzed in the technical writings that I find. 

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  1. Cora WilliamsonOctober 31, 2023 at 9:30 AM

    Hi Blaine! I'm sorry to hear that you feel as though you are behind. Honestly it sounds like you have a very specific plan for how to proceed, so try not to worry too much! Because most of your revision sounds like it will be expanding and clarifying on what you already have, the page count should be easy to meet. I think that writing your paper will probably pass faster than you expect. Good luck and happy writing!

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